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| p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Looking for feedback on my work and any hints please... |
Please think of these comments as being as neutral as possible, and you'll read them correctly. I'm not the best one to give you any kind of comments, as I have a lot to learn myself, but I don't want you to be left without any feedback for your images. Remember, this is just my opinion, it's certainly different from every other photographer out there, take what you think makes sense and ignore the rest.
I don't find lightning images much compelling, so I won't comment much on the first image except to say that I miss "more information" on the frame, everything is hidden in the extreme darkness, and the silhouettes don't give me much information.
On the second image, you captured a beautiful sky, however I feel it's lacking something of interest on the foreground. Sometimes a good silhouette works; you can google "joshua park silhouettes" (image search) for good examples of what I mean. Obviously silhouettes are not the only way to use such beautiful sky in an image, just one example.
I would also suggest to correct your horizons, your camera seems to be tilted in both captures. You can correct the tilt using post processing software. In the first photo there is a completely black triangle in the upper left corner (roof?) which probably could have been avoided.