Absolutely! First, please keep in mind that I'm just some clown on the internet. So, don't read too much into it, this is a great image.
My statement had two points and I'm not sure which one you wanted me to expand on, so I'll expand on both:
1. Post #4 stated that the feet should be visible because of the title. My opinion is that the crop in the middle of his lower leg makes the image feel incomplete. Your subject has this "BOOM, HERE I AM!!" thing going on and I want to see his full strut!
2. There are some dots at the top of the image. I wasn't sure if they're supposed to be little birds, or maybe they're a side effect from some cloning? Here's a resized cut from your image...
I don't get it (the concept). What is that behind him and what is it's significance to this shot? Would also like to see the feet. Wardrobe looks like a complete malfunction with the wrinkled shirt and pants and then the nice jacket. Of course just my opinion though