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p.1 #1 · Autumn Fairy


Hi my name is Tim. I've been watching and reading posts in Fred Miranda for about a year and a half now and I finally decided to post a few shots from Halloween.

Please let me know your thoughts...



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Nov 19, 2012 at 04:55 PM
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p.1 #2 · Autumn Fairy


Howdy,

I see your photo post has had 247+ views and NO comments from viewers.

I know that can be disappointing and often discourages people from posting/participating in a forum like this.

So, I will post a comment or two and maybe that will get others to contribute their views too.

As with anything where a subjective view (opinion) is shared, there can be many views of the same issue or subject.
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Welcome to posting in this forum.

I enjoyed seeing the photos and thank you for sharing them here.

Nice costume.

Good color photos.

What would do differently?

My Simple Suggestions:

1. Stand up and extend the limbs. In two shots she is hunched over and that hides some of the fun/nice/pretty costume.

2. See image 3. Notice how the left hand is holding the mask. Notice how the arm crosses the body. I would have had the model use her right hand instead. Also notice one arm is missing and she is hunched over again.

I hope these comments help you.



Nov 21, 2012 at 04:10 AM
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p.1 #3 · Autumn Fairy


and it's about time, but I think these might have had more impact about a month ago. Very nice work.
Douglas



Nov 21, 2012 at 03:09 PM
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p.1 #4 · Autumn Fairy


2nd one is my favorite. Did you do any without the mask? I would have liked to see her face.


Nov 22, 2012 at 03:00 AM
 



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p.1 #5 · Autumn Fairy


Thank you all for your great feedback!

Steady Hand, Great idea! I was focusing more on the trees and color which I would lose every time I tried a standing pose. I did however take a few and liked this one.

Northern Nurse, here's one without the mask.












Nov 25, 2012 at 04:11 PM
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p.1 #6 · Autumn Fairy


Great shots Tim, Love them all #2 is my favorite I would like #1 better if you had shifted position or moved the model so the tree was not directly behind her head.
Keep up the great work!
D



Nov 26, 2012 at 08:27 PM
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p.1 #7 · Autumn Fairy


Tsup DB? Great to hear from you! Thanks for the feedback. I will keep an eye out for those tree's in the future, but you know that model has plants on the brain anyway! HAHA


Nov 30, 2012 at 02:39 PM





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