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 p.1 #2 · Boy TN State Soccer Championship | |
1. I like the b&w rendition, good job.
2. back of player prominent in frame, not a keeper IMO
3. not bad, good action, bg not the best, crop it tighter and maybe try a square format
4. would be better from other side, prime focus has a back and no face for the action, not a keeper IMO
5. pretty good, is there any additional room to the left to balance the frame?
6. backs and lack of faces
7. good frame and exposure, given ball position, maybe earlier frame would have been better
3, 5, & 7 are your best. Look for action coming towards you, frame with balls, faces at peak action. Try to get low, on your knees or butt.
Keep shooting, it gets better 
Regards,
Matt
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