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From the other morning in the Berkeley hills. Pretty intense contrast but subjectively that's how I remember it. Does it work? C&C welcome.

Phil

Nov 01, 2012 at 10:06 PM

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p.1 #2 · Light and dark

I'd like it more if there was a bit more room in the upper left and a bit less darkness in the lower left.

Nov 02, 2012 at 08:18 AM

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p.1 #3 · Light and dark

It works for me, Phil.
You might consider cloning out all the tiny bright spots. They look like lights, but they illuminate nothing. By removing them, the whole image is about nature.
Just $.02

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Charlie

Nov 02, 2012 at 03:16 PM

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p.1 #4 · Light and dark

Thanks Charlie and Rc

I do have a version with a bit more room on top. Can't do much about the bottom left though...
I'll definitely get rid of those bright spots Charlie.

Phil

Nov 03, 2012 at 07:50 PM


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