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different for me
interested what you think

Scott



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  Canon EOS 5D Mark II    EF100mm f/2.8 Macro USM lens    100mm    f/8.0    1/250s    100 ISO    0.0 EV  




Oct 23, 2012 at 12:37 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Autumnal Still Life


Nice balance and symmetry. Lovely, warm colors. Won't quibble over verticals, I like the proportions of horizontal divisions.

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Bob



Oct 23, 2012 at 12:40 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Autumnal Still Life


I like the shapes and colors. Anything there to add to the bottom? The edge of the shelf perhaps?


Oct 23, 2012 at 04:36 AM
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Bob Jarman wrote:
Nice balance and symmetry. Lovely, warm colors. Won't quibble over verticals, I like the proportions of horizontal divisions.

Regards,

Bob

thanks Bob



Nov 01, 2012 at 01:32 AM
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AuntiPode wrote:
I like the shapes and colors. Anything there to add to the bottom? The edge of the shelf perhaps?

Nope. Shot a bit too tight. Of course there is always some cloning as an option.

Scott



Nov 01, 2012 at 01:33 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Autumnal Still Life


I guess the edge of the bottom shelf would help to balance out the image. Since that is not possible, maybe crop just a tad higher so the traces of the bottom shelf are not visible and then crop on the top to remove the traces of the upper shelf and supports. You can create your own frame with a black border.

I tend to overthink these issues. The attention should be on the goards and the shelving makes little difference.



Nov 01, 2012 at 03:39 AM
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Yup. Possible to build a shelf:







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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Autumnal Still Life


excellent carpentry


Nov 01, 2012 at 07:16 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Autumnal Still Life


Flipping good. Also much better than being shelfless.


Nov 01, 2012 at 12:34 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Autumnal Still Life


Well done Karen. Just what the bottom pumpkins pined for.

Bob



Nov 01, 2012 at 05:59 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Autumnal Still Life


mind sharing your how-to?


Nov 01, 2012 at 06:13 PM
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Used the rectangular selection to copy the top shelf edge and pasted from the clipboard to a new layer. Then moved the shelf edge and slightly rotated it. Then used the erase tool on some of the top edge of the shelf to restore the lower edge of the pumpkins. Then merged the layers and used the clone stamp on the edges to re-build the ends and apply dark to the underside. Also retouched the edge with the clone stamp to remove characteristic marks that could be obviously matched to the top shelf.


Nov 01, 2012 at 08:15 PM
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thx again Karen
its a great job, including the shadow beneath the shelf.
Scott



Nov 02, 2012 at 02:18 AM





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