Nice image... The only things that I would do, if it were my image, are add a little vibrace & saturation to the yellow line... I believe this would aid in a convergence point... Second, I would mask & blur the brighter light, upper left... It, to me, is in competition... Jim
1 - Darken foreground yo enhance the mood of foreboding.
2 - Perhaps alter the color balance to make it more neutral, or perhaps very slightly bluish if you are going for spooky rather than nostalgic.
3 - Use a noise reduction to make the fog creamier, or go the other way and add slight but more obvious grain. Either method can be compelling, but in different ways. Smoother can look more natural. Grainier harkens to our visual experience with moody film renditions.
4 - Perhaps a wee bit of clockwise rotation.
5 - In the end, always defer to whoever prepares your food when you aren't watching.
Very nice capture!! One thing that I notice though, is a slight lens flair in the upper left from the light source. It drew my eyes pretty easily. (Perhaps that's even the Sun trying to peek through?? I'd still clone it out).
Fine image. Great mood, choice of POV, nice job with a difficult exposure.
Beautiful tune-up by Karen.
I prefer the first of your just added reworks.
Scott
