Archive 2012 · Behind the Door..

paulmartinmd
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Model Abbie Liu
Indonesian-Chinese
Jakarta, Indonesia

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	http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8038/8058687258_bef1580c6f_c.jpg


	http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5339/6936799580_09778ebf8c_c.jpg

Oct 07, 2012 at 05:40 PM

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p.1 #2 · Behind the Door..

Hi,

She is pretty. That always helps a photo.

Of these two images I prefer the second image (BW).

However, I would prefer to see more shadow detail (in areas of face/neck/chest)....and my eye does not really like the way her left hand appears (tendons prominent).

I hope these comments help you.

Oct 07, 2012 at 05:49 PM

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p.1 #3 · Behind the Door..

Steady Hand wrote:
Hi,

She is pretty. That always helps a photo.

thanks a lot for the comment sir, I really next that to improve my craft..

Oct 07, 2012 at 07:29 PM


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