I really like the first one. My only nitpick would be that her finger being bent back is distracting to me. The piece of hair could also be distracting to some, but for me I don't mind as it adds to the look.
I guess I'm fairly brave. She doesn't scare me! She's beautiful, and the first shot shows that better than the second.
Something about the black in the second shot makes me do a double take. Is it blocked up? I'm not sure.
At any rate, it's still nice work to my eyes.