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The comp looks fine.
The processing needs tuning to my eye.
Probably a bit too contrasty. Karen appears to have pulled back some detail from the shadows which I think is needed.
Orange tones in the original look a bit over-saturated. In Karen's rework, meant to add a bit more vibrancy and life to the water and image, the neck of the bird is far too saturated.
I'd like to have a go at the RAW if you can post a link or send it.