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p.1 #1 · in the woods


Looking to shoot reflection of snow capped mountain, hoping to catch early morning colors. Instead, it was fully covered with fog/clouds up in Mt Rainier.

I found some fresh wildflowers along this narrow walk.



Critics and comments please!









� Steve Park 2012

early morning wildflowers





� Steve Park 2012

shot a couple of days earlier, the last light




Sep 03, 2012 at 12:25 PM
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p.1 #2 · in the woods


Steve,

See... I might not be in the majority but I like the shallow depth of field in the first. It adds to the feeling of wondering where the path might lead. Looks like a pretty natural - though dark - exposure on the second What an impressive scene!



Sep 03, 2012 at 07:35 PM
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p.1 #3 · in the woods


Both nice Steve.
I really like the first.
Mark



Sep 03, 2012 at 07:42 PM
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p.1 #4 · in the woods


Mark Cronin wrote:
Both nice Steve.
I really like the first.
Mark


David Patterson wrote:
Steve,

See... I might not be in the majority but I like the shallow depth of field in the first. It adds to the feeling of wondering where the path might lead. Looks like a pretty natural - though dark - exposure on the second What an impressive scene!


Hi Mark and David, I don't think you guys are the majority. I don't shoot wide open for landscape photos, but I tried different this time and felt pretty good about the shallow DOF. I guess it's not for most others. Thanks for your comments.

Steve




Sep 03, 2012 at 09:25 PM
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p.1 #5 · in the woods


Yep. Good stuff! I really like #1, but the focal point is hard to find on it. Number two is just great as well.


Sep 03, 2012 at 09:29 PM
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p.1 #6 · in the woods


brockwhittaker wrote:
Yep. Good stuff! I really like #1, but the focal point is hard to find on it. Number two is just great as well.


The focus point was on the pine tree on the right. I wanted emphasize the "S line(kind of)" of the narrow walkway.



Sep 03, 2012 at 09:33 PM
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p.1 #7 · in the woods


Nice set. However, I guess, I am one of those commoners who would like to see more DOF in the first image.


Sep 03, 2012 at 10:18 PM
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p.1 #8 · in the woods


Hey Steve,

Nice work on these. And while generally speaking we do like massive DOF, there are times when using limited DOF works. It's a nice change up to do. I like the little pathway in #1 also, very effective. Nice light in #2, I think that also works, the reflection is nice icing on the cake.

Jim



Sep 04, 2012 at 01:38 AM
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p.1 #9 · in the woods


Thanks for your kind comments, Jim and AMaji. Appreciated.

Steve



Sep 04, 2012 at 07:34 AM
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p.1 #10 · in the woods


Very nice work. The shallow dof in the 1st is suprisingly appealing to me, too. And the light in that one is beautifully captured.

Barry



Sep 05, 2012 at 07:00 AM
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p.1 #11 · in the woods


Both great. #1 has an etherial look to it.


Sep 05, 2012 at 04:44 PM
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Steve Park wrote:
Hi Mark and David, I don't think you guys are the majority. I don't shoot wide open for landscape photos, but I tried different this time and felt pretty good about the shallow DOF. I guess it's not for most others. Thanks for your comments.

Steve



Nice to think outside the box,
Mark



Sep 05, 2012 at 04:49 PM
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p.1 #13 · in the woods


Well, for me No. 1 does not work. My eyes hunt for something to grab onto and find nothing due to the lack of DOF in the foreground and background. It also lacks any focal point, leaving me somewhat frustrated wandering about looking for something.

Maybe my eyes are just old fashioned and resist new concepts.



Sep 05, 2012 at 04:59 PM
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p.1 #14 · in the woods


Hi Barry, Thanks for your nice comment, appreciated.

chez wrote:
Well, for me No. 1 does not work. My eyes hunt for something to grab onto and find nothing due to the lack of DOF in the foreground and background. It also lacks any focal point, leaving me somewhat frustrated wandering about looking for something.

Maybe my eyes are just old fashioned and resist new concepts.


Hi Harry, I understand your frustration, apppreciate your critic.

I was thinking, had I photographed this scene with unlimited DOF, this would be just another post card scene at the best. When I took this photo, surrounding areas were quite a bit misty, fogged up. I saw this narrow pathway with imaginery S curve in the woods, also saw beautiful wildflowers...it was like dreaming. I tried to re-create what I saw with the shallowest DOF, as if I was in half asleep.

Steve




Sep 05, 2012 at 08:00 PM





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