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magyarangol Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #1 · London Model - Exhayle Was lucky enough to shoot with "Exhayle" last week in London. Below are some of the images from our our time together. Such a fun and great model to shoot with, she even brought along some wigs (hair pieces) for us to play with ha! Very refreshing! I would really appreciate some constructive feedback on these if you have time to look/comment. It would really help me. Many thanks 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Aug 14, 2012 at 03:06 PM

jeremy_clay Online • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #2 · London Model - Exhayle I like your logo and 4th/5th image (though they are pretty much the same). I don't think the vignette is required here, personally. Aug 14, 2012 at 03:32 PM

Steady Hand Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #3 · London Model - Exhayle Howdy Spencer, I liked images 1 and 5 the most from this set. My favorite is the expression and blue color shown in image #1. That said, I think it would be better to not show the discolored (orange/burnt) looking skin on her arm (which looks like shadow tone areas), so I suggest cropping to put the lower edge of the image just below her bust line (reducing the amount of that arm shown) and then work on that discolored part. Aug 14, 2012 at 04:11 PM

Bert DeMars Offline • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #4 · London Model - Exhayle Had you used the same lighting as the 3/4 length and longer lens on images 1,4 and 5, you could have avoided the dark elbow and arm shadows. Looks like you used a brush tool to do the vignetting. it could be a bit more subtle. IMHO. Aug 14, 2012 at 04:40 PM

magyarangol Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #5 · London Model - Exhayle Guys - thanks so much for your comments. Hearing it from all three of you also means a lot, as I admire and respect your work. As I was creating the vignette effect I was worried that it was having a knock on effect with shadows etc but.... I guess I was looking for an edgy look and maybe was getting carried away? lol I'm happy to have my thoughts and doubts confirmed though and I thank you for your input Cheers! Aug 14, 2012 at 07:57 PM

jfinite Online • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #6 · London Model - Exhayle 2, 4 and 5 are marvelous! Aug 14, 2012 at 08:15 PM

magyarangol Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #7 · London Model - Exhayle Cheers J Some love across the ocean to you Aug 14, 2012 at 08:19 PM

lmilhanjr Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #8 · London Model - Exhayle Lookin' good. Blue is my favorite, however I wish there was a little more contrast between the background and her shirt. The White shirt makes her body kind of disappear into the background - unless of course that's what you were going for That orange outfit in number 5 would probably look great with the blue wig in number 1! Aug 14, 2012 at 11:08 PM

magyarangol Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #9 · London Model - Exhayle Thank you lmilhanjr. I might try and post the originals before PP to gauge thoughts EDIT: Basic clean but not much PP. Aug 16, 2012 at 08:26 AM

rodmcwha Online • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #10 · London Model - Exhayle Looks like it was a fun shoot, and you got some great images! (Plenty of separation of the whites on my monitor, by the way.) The best criticism comes from you and your client-any other should be run through a serious filter system. No one will ever stand out as exceptional, while trying to please a forum. My opinion, ymmv. Aug 23, 2012 at 07:58 PM

magyarangol Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #11 · London Model - Exhayle rodmcwha wrote: Looks like it was a fun shoot, and you got some great images! (Plenty of separation of the whites on my monitor, by the way.) The best criticism comes from you and your client-any other should be run through a serious filter system. No one will ever stand out as exceptional, while trying to please a forum. My opinion, ymmv. Hey rodmcwha and thanks for your comments. I agree, I never thought there was an issue with the white separation but hey... there you go. It was indeed a fun shoot I was a bit concerned though about the lack of comments/input on this thread and I sometimes wonder why I bother posting here tbh.Particularly when it had 1,936 hits! Maybe putting NSFW or semi naked in a title might help me get more feedback in the future Don't get me wrong, I'm not so much complaining from the point of view of reading people saying "nice" things about my work. My hopes were that I would get more critique to learn from. I guess the lack of replies must mean there's not much wrong with my images lol Good point you make about critique from the client and myself and I thank you for taking the time to comment Cheers fella Aug 24, 2012 at 03:05 PM

fstop212 Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #12 · London Model - Exhayle you're work is wonderful here. Aug 24, 2012 at 06:46 PM

magyarangol Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #13 · London Model - Exhayle fstop212 wrote: you're work is wonderful here. Aww thanks Fstop212 Aug 25, 2012 at 06:12 PM

bohemia Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #14 · London Model - Exhayle The one with the blue wig is really nice! Aug 25, 2012 at 06:47 PM

qtiprh5 Offline • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #15 · London Model - Exhayle You are clearly a pro. I love your exposure and lighting. Good stuff. Aug 30, 2012 at 02:59 AM

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