good abstract capture. you might think about getting rid of the thin, distracting line on the left bottom, and the tiny light highlights at bottom left. I like the processing.
regards, tom
Aug 08, 2012 at 08:59 AM
Charlie Shugart Offline • • • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off
Luv it!
I agree with Tom about doing some cloning out, but IMO it's not a big deal.
Kenny- Are you doing much recent work with Tri-X?
I started out with that film long ago because it was cheaper than Kodachromes, and I needed to hoard my money for travel. But I liked it then- and still do now.
Charlie
Well, if you believe that Arista Premium 400 is rebranded Tri-X, then yeah. I buy it because 1) it's relatively inexpensive and 2) I can still get it in 100' rolls.
Regarding the thin, distracting line bottom left, it's part of the sculpture and, in my mind, at least, necessary.
I prefer this abstract over #2 but I am enjoying both Kenny.
I would take Tom's suggestion on cloning, maybe take a tad off the top, and submit to the WA. Assuming, of course, that the next one's you post arent even better!
