She looks great!! her poses are nice and stimulating(IMO) I really think you could have found a better background.Other then that, i think you did a very nice job.
Thanks...
Usually love your stuff....this time you hit a double and reached 3rd on an error.....I agree shallower DOF. Top left looks like she is about to drop a deuce.
In addition to what's already been said, her eye sockets are too dark for my taste in top right. The tattoo is also distracting, but that has nothing to do with your photography. I can't imagine why an attractive (or unattractive, for that matter) young woman would do that to their body, but it seems to be a growing craze.
Have up against a plain background on the first 2 and they would rock even more.
What a stunner, poses are fine, the mouth open in the last isn't for me.
