feedback . . . I would say the 'hands on the face' is a cliche and looks very unnatural and forced. Lighting is good, but just a little bit hot in some areas (as I'm sure you know). Thanks for not over processing the skin as that is so overdone these days . . so she looks natural and 'real'. Of course the hair looks over sharpened and distorted, but it's probably the conversion for the net. The whitening of the eyes seems just a little bit over done (IF they are whitened). Overall though it's nice.
Hands don't work for me either. I find that when doing beauty work, sometimes the hands just don't work, especially if they end up being different colored...
i really like this because it seems more about the fine details of this woman's body than just a modeling head shot of some sort
the texture of her skin, the unevenness of her teeth, the shape of her finger nails, etc. it makes you want to explore her surface (there's a new one...)
i too really like that you didn't over process her skin, however i think you could go a little easier on some of the other processing. sharpening and adjustments to the eyes in particular. i don't think you need to make any major change... just dial it back, make it more subtle.