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Archive 2012 · Audrey

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p.1 #1 · Audrey

Had a session with this lovely girl yesterday, C&C please

Aug 06, 2012 at 03:05 AM

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p.1 #2 · Audrey

2and 3 look a little dark.
They look like a one light set up which i like and you can get great results from.

Aug 06, 2012 at 06:11 AM

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p.1 #3 · Audrey

hello,

You made a nice set of photos of a pretty girl.

Good job.

My favorite is image#1.

Aug 06, 2012 at 11:48 AM

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p.1 #4 · Audrey

bbourizk wrote:
2and 3 look a little dark.
They look like a one light set up which i like and you can get great results from.

+1
She is a pretty girl for sure. Just lighten up a bit and make them pop a bit.

Aug 06, 2012 at 11:54 AM

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p.1 #5 · Audrey

Thanks for the comment

I'll try out next time

Aug 08, 2012 at 03:47 AM

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p.1 #6 · Audrey

Would this be better?

Aug 09, 2012 at 04:47 AM

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p.1 #7 · Audrey

Very nice the 1st is my choice. Consider putting a little more space between the background and the model.
Douglas

Aug 09, 2012 at 07:01 AM

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p.1 #8 · Audrey

1 - Consider cropping the top of her shoe.
2 - Looks underexposed. The extra one you added below is better.
3 - Nice.

Aug 10, 2012 at 09:11 AM

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p.1 #9 · Audrey

Beautiful girl - #1 is my favorite. I agree with brightening them up, and I'd move her further from the wall/backdrop next time to avoid the shadows in #2. She's also broad lit in #2 which makes her face look wider.

Aug 10, 2012 at 10:22 AM

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p.1 #10 · Audrey

Maybe its my monitor (or old eyes), but the images don't sharp? Did you have to place the model so close to the background?

Aug 10, 2012 at 10:29 AM

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p.1 #11 · Audrey

douter wrote:
Very nice the 1st is my choice. Consider putting a little more space between the background and the model.
Douglas
Alright, will request them to have some spaces between the background.
Thanks

Aug 10, 2012 at 10:09 PM

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p.1 #12 · Audrey

jfinite wrote:
1 - Consider cropping the top of her shoe.
2 - Looks underexposed. The extra one you added below is better.
3 - Nice.

1 - Will crop it out.

2 - I'll fill in light for those underexposed
3 - Thanks.

Aug 10, 2012 at 10:11 PM

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p.1 #13 · Audrey

Lisa_Holloway wrote:
Beautiful girl - #1 is my favorite. I agree with brightening them up, and I'd move her further from the wall/backdrop next time to avoid the shadows in #2. She's also broad lit in #2 which makes her face look wider.
Thanks for your comment, will try better next time.

Aug 10, 2012 at 10:12 PM

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p.1 #14 · Audrey

Ed Peters wrote:
Maybe its my monitor (or old eyes), but the images don't sharp? Did you have to place the model so close to the background?
I reduced the sharpness of the pic a little.

Aug 10, 2012 at 10:13 PM

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p.1 #15 · Audrey

happyfamily wrote:
Would this be better?
http://i.imgur.com/e8sjE.jpg

No. Now you've made ot ordinary.

Aug 11, 2012 at 08:48 AM

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p.1 #16 · Audrey

Osai wrote:
No. Now you've made ot ordinary.

Osai, I like you....

Aug 11, 2012 at 09:57 AM


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