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Henk Bos
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p.1 #1 · Portraits (revised)

Thanks so much for commenting on the first serie. Went back to the drawing board and had another go at a few. Think there are some big improvements.

And yes, all gold and diamonds

Jul 18, 2004 at 06:44 PM

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p.1 #2 · Portraits (revised)

Hi HB -
On my monitor there is too much blue - What I think should be white
in her eyes is very blue - I put the first image into PS, and made the whites white, and to My eyes it is much better - Try it, and see what you think - give me some feed back -
I like your shots very much, and the girl/lady is very pleasing -
Paul

Jul 18, 2004 at 07:02 PM

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p.1 #3 · Portraits (revised)

Excellent shots and very attractive lady, but also on my moniotr the whites of the eyes are showing too much blue.
I think the third photo is the best, the veil adds an air of mystery.

Phil

Jul 18, 2004 at 07:18 PM

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p.1 #4 · Portraits (revised)

Is it just the eyes that are too blue? I had a little problem getting the eyes right. Will give it another go although it's not that bad on my monitor.

Thanks for the input.

Phil, this is for the Al Thani Contest in Qatar. Hurry and you can still participate!

Jul 18, 2004 at 07:28 PM

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p.1 #5 · Portraits (revised)

Also i would try a shot where her eyes are not looking at the camera, in shot 2 she looks as though she is in shock, i would try that shot with her not looking!...other than that the shots are nice!

Jul 18, 2004 at 07:33 PM

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p.1 #6 · Portraits (revised)

Did some eye work and think it's better. Problem is she has such big eyes and I don't want her to look like she was 'pinched in Italy' as Cristina said.

Jul 18, 2004 at 07:50 PM


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