Like the face and the look, but first impression is that the eyes have been whitened too much and eyelashes sharpened too much?
The rest of the pic looking nicely natural.
Maybe the hidden eye is hidden a tad too much? But I still like it
She is very pretty, and your use of her expression is lovely work. Lighting in #1 does more for her as the crop and pose add to it. #2 is gutsy and bold, it makes me feel good to see that. #3/3a are ok compared.
