I like them. I love some of them. I generally don't like low contrast secondary to lens flare as in #4.
I would have never processed them the way you did, which is why I like them so much.
In the images where the model does not or smile only slightly her jaw appears a bit clenched. In image 2 it's probably the camera angle, looking down...
Love the Bokeh (hope I spelled that right), especially in 5 and the use of negative space!
Disclaimer: I have no clue what I'm talking about. Especially in regards to straight up portraiture.
1 for what seems to be a "candid" shot it seems to look a bit too posed (too camera aware)
2. Cheesy grin. And hanging arms accentuate their length (which seem a bit extreme here).
3. I like this one a lot. Great simple pose. Only nitpick is that tree in the background doesn't seem to add anything (I.e. I think this would better without it)
4. Love the lighting here (though personally I like more contrast, but that's me). There's something about the bunching up of the jacket/shirt that bugs me. I think it would be stranger without it.
5. Playful. But again, the smile seems a bit too contrived.
6. This is is my favorite. The composition makes sense. The pose looks natural. And the serious expression accentuates here beauty. I'd love to see this one with a strong b/w conversion.
Again, these are nitpicks to a very fine set.
Thanks for sharing!
zalmyb wrote:
Your stuff rocks. As I'm sure you know.
Here are a few nitpicks
Disclaimer: I have no clue what I'm talking about. Especially in regards to straight up portraiture.
1 for what seems to be a "candid" shot it seems to look a bit too posed (too camera aware)
2. Cheesy grin. And hanging arms accentuate their length (which seem a bit extreme here).
3. I like this one a lot. Great simple pose. Only nitpick is that tree in the background doesn't seem to add anything (I.e. I think this would better without it)
4. Love the lighting here (though personally I like more contrast, but that's me). There's something about the bunching up of the jacket/shirt that bugs me. I think it would be stranger without it.
5. Playful. But again, the smile seems a bit too contrived.
6. This is is my favorite. The composition makes sense. The pose looks natural. And the serious expression accentuates here beauty. I'd love to see this one with a strong b/w conversion.
Again, these are nitpicks to a very fine set.
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Thanks for taking the time to provide feed backs and comments. Much appreciated.
