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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


C&C Welcome. Shot at the dance studio. Plan to do part 2 for some urban shots.

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6 Fluid






7 Elegant






8 En Pointe






9 <3 (and yes, these are 2 different shots of her, notice her hair and arms are different from L to R)








Mar 27, 2012 at 02:45 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Awesome shots. Photo # 4 my fav.


Mar 27, 2012 at 03:04 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Very nice Mr. Welsh. Love the lighting and the clean look in these. Especially love the spotlight on the wall in 3. I also like the composites.

OT - I know it really looks nothing like it, but for some reason, every time I see your logo I wanna go grab a root beer

--David



Mar 27, 2012 at 03:15 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Nice job...I like #1,3 and 4 the most...extention cord in #5 is not so good...


Mar 27, 2012 at 03:30 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Yes on #4. The expression is priceless. I also like # 6.


Mar 27, 2012 at 03:37 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Wow, stunning!


Mar 27, 2012 at 06:20 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Lots of strong shots in this set. #1 right, for example captures a special moment and would look very good on its own.

#5 is also one of your best. The electrical cord along the floor is only a slight distraction.

Good work on the composites. One thing that comes out in them is the black line of one shot gets put across her legs when the shot is assembled. Is there something you can do to control that? (#6 & #7)



Mar 27, 2012 at 11:41 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


I like these a lot! Would love to see them all without the ceiling tile.

Cheers,

Sean



Mar 27, 2012 at 01:15 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


These are gorgeous Andrew! I'm really loving #4, 5, and 8. You captured her grace and elegance perfectly.


Mar 27, 2012 at 01:36 PM
 



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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Really nice photos of an athletic graceful young lady.
3 is my favorite.
Strong series overall.



Mar 27, 2012 at 01:51 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Very nice! Is there a way to soften out the ceiling in #7? The tiles and the position of her hands looks a bit awkward.


Mar 27, 2012 at 04:02 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Thanks everyone for your comments so far.

I didn't bother PS'ing the extension chord out because I thought it wouldn't be too much of a distraction, but clearly it is

I could clone-stamp the ceiling seams out of #7. She is really tall, like 5'11" or 6'0" so it was hard to avoid ceiling in the shot without it looking like it wasn't her (i.e. shooting from above her)

I probably should get a grid for my softbox, there would be less spill on shots like #5. I also just an hour ago put my AB800 in the mail to PCB repair because it flaked out on me at the start of the shoot. I wanted to use it to nuke the wall but it finally died 6 months after it took a dunk in a pool... while plugged in and fully charged =/ I'm still happy with how it all turned out though. This set was a bit more studio-ish and strobist-ish than I normally shoot.



Mar 27, 2012 at 05:26 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Love these - 5 is so elegant, 1 and 2 are really really good. Not much to complain about here!!


Mar 27, 2012 at 05:33 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Amazing work, all of them are excellent. I love how your processing suits the mood.


Mar 27, 2012 at 06:57 PM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Lovely, well shot!


Mar 27, 2012 at 07:00 PM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Nice job. #'s 1, 3 , and 4 are the winners for me.


Mar 27, 2012 at 07:19 PM
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


thanks guys, appreciate the kind words.


Mar 28, 2012 at 02:13 AM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · HS Senior - Dance - Melissa


Fantastic work.


Mar 28, 2012 at 02:55 AM





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