Lots of strong shots in this set. #1 right, for example captures a special moment and would look very good on its own.
#5 is also one of your best. The electrical cord along the floor is only a slight distraction.
Good work on the composites. One thing that comes out in them is the black line of one shot gets put across her legs when the shot is assembled. Is there something you can do to control that? (#6 & #7)
I didn't bother PS'ing the extension chord out because I thought it wouldn't be too much of a distraction, but clearly it is
I could clone-stamp the ceiling seams out of #7. She is really tall, like 5'11" or 6'0" so it was hard to avoid ceiling in the shot without it looking like it wasn't her (i.e. shooting from above her)
I probably should get a grid for my softbox, there would be less spill on shots like #5. I also just an hour ago put my AB800 in the mail to PCB repair because it flaked out on me at the start of the shoot. I wanted to use it to nuke the wall but it finally died 6 months after it took a dunk in a pool... while plugged in and fully charged =/ I'm still happy with how it all turned out though. This set was a bit more studio-ish and strobist-ish than I normally shoot.
