The image is too small to be sure, but it seems at posted it seems to want sharpness. Also, the reeds to me add distraction rather than foreground interest.
I have posted a larger image for easier viewing. I will try a version without the reeds and maybe a version removing the
lowest set of reeds in the lower left corner. Thank you for your thoughts.
Kent, glad you like the tonal range I was struggling with making it too contrasty.
Bob, I am glad that you like the image. This is a different view of Mt. Shasta which was shot about 50 miles north of Mt. Shasta. As the crow flies it may be a little closer than 50 miles. I accidentally stumbled onto this spot while exploring the area. I will address the pixelation in the sky.
AntiPode, I seem to struggle with under or over sharpening but I like your version. I will do a mid tone bump as well.
Alatoo, I have versions in landscape mode and I will work on a B/W which I will post later. Thank you for the suggestion.