Archive 2012 · Shooting @ Lake Garda (Italy)

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p.1 #1 · Shooting @ Lake Garda (Italy)

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Feb 28, 2012 at 08:59 AM

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p.1 #2 · Shooting @ Lake Garda (Italy)

Hi,
I bite the bullet.
Try to post the links direct so the picture appears here instead of linking.
i think you get more responses and advice.

For pic 1 setting is nice but the light is a bit harsh. Flash could be a bit higher positioned so the shadow on her breast is not there. She is too hot, he is not. Post processing can do a lot here to improve.

http://public.bay.livefilestore.com/y1pPi3x1op5_2cAIhYuVSkSml15mJo3bWHsM3hnEK2e2C0HFUpmlaj4rsl1gS96p7sKEjwVElY0MykAUbAwm4DRlw/malcesinehochzeit.jpg

http://public.bay.livefilestore.com/y1pMT0clP-2F6cwykG8dCH2-HUULiC4gGplGVHa0lhMEfnRB_3ZU8VAE8yTjWb_DyK8EZZHRolADfu-VzyOpOJhEQ/malcesinehochzeit%20a.jpg
I adjusted this one a bit, if it's not ok, I will take it down, but this is just a rough edit to illustrate what I mean.

pic 2, needs postprocessing focus the light on the couple now the attention goes to the bystander down the street. Great location!

http://public.bay.livefilestore.com/y1pYsnqPO_IkSWXKCo-lRKUjQc8v0DhzT8y9BJBoZGmnJ-M-Zei6o3rD5BytSFAwFWxz3qp-bcQp5tgDDtFg_TpAQ/malcesine-hochzeit.jpg

http://public.bay.livefilestore.com/y1pYsnqPO_IkSWnltC-xF-HmKQb4HH60E71egFyzKxQ18cG3Avr03ZTNSgyjRX0pNIyAMxazi7ztbVDtYe5e-u4AA/malcesine-hochzeit%20a.jpg

Edited on Feb 28, 2012 at 04:48 PM · View previous versions

Feb 28, 2012 at 04:08 PM

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p.1 #3 · Shooting @ Lake Garda (Italy)

Cool lacation indeed.
Pic 1- I'd use more horizontal crop, make her a bit darker and him lighter,
Pic 2- The street light is getting most attention to me- just a touch of off camera flash on them and we would have a winner.
Paste a url directly into post- more feedback guaranteed

Wojtek.

Feb 28, 2012 at 04:16 PM


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