Bob Jarman Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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Jesse,
Couple of thoughts:
Might try cropping about 1/2 of the water at the bottom - the even 1/3 division, to me, detracts.
Why f2.2 and 1/3200sec? The resolution really suffers, at least on this laptop, especially in the tree line. Perhaps a crop up-sized is the problem?
The eye expects, and is drawn to, areas of focus (that is edges with sharp contrast) - frankly I do not see anything in focus, and oddly my eye is drawn to what appears to be someone standing on the riverbank.
I glanced through some of the other images in your portfolio - nice work - and I did not notice any glaring focus issues either.
Hope this helps,
Bob
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