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Bob Jarman Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #1 · Savannah Steps... Image from an earlier trip to Savannah, curious if it works, and/or how migth you change it (other than trash bin). Regards, Bob   NIKON D2X    22 mm    f/5.6    1/250 sec    200 ISO    +0.3 EV   Jan 04, 2012 at 01:55 AM

sbeme Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #2 · Savannah Steps... Bob, I'm glad to see this. Because, as you know, I was also shooting railings and stairs alongside you and I have struggled to determine if any of my shots work. I am eager to hear what others think. My thoughts: I really like the toning. I wish you shot to include more of the railings. The shot feels "wide" and dominated by the foreground stairs with less a sense of movement up the stairs, destination, progression than I would like. The railings on the right become indistinct, lost in blocked up shadows and could stand a bit of recovery. Maybe I'll put up a few stairway/railing shots for you to take a shot at, get others input. I find these subjects interesting but difficult to make work, much like trying to create effecive images of trees. Scott Edited on Jan 04, 2012 at 05:16 PM · View previous versions Jan 04, 2012 at 01:56 PM

Bob Jarman Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #3 · Savannah Steps... Thanks Scott, Processing was a quickie, I intend to revisit and apply a different workflow, if nothing more than a challenge to recover the lost areas you have identified, and perhaps crop down some - this is about a FF image. No trees - my frustration threshold is too low to tackle those Bob Jan 04, 2012 at 03:13 PM

cgardner Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #4 · Savannah Steps... Nothing wrong here that a reclining nude in draped over the steps couldn't fix.. Jan 04, 2012 at 06:49 PM

Bob Jarman Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #5 · Savannah Steps... Ahhh, you've detected use of content-aware-fill! I think the best we could have done at the moment would have been Scott draped in Canon gear - not quite the same aesthetic Bob Jan 04, 2012 at 07:58 PM

AuntiPode Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #6 · Savannah Steps... Perhaps some vignette and a darker look in soft sepia? Jan 04, 2012 at 08:39 PM

cgardner Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #7 · Savannah Steps... Bob Jarman wrote: I think the best we could have done at the moment would have been Scott draped in Canon gear - not quite the same aesthetic In the shadows at the top of the stairs we see a sitting man, head in hands. Following the stairs downward we see a on the steps below a Canon lens — one of the big expensive white ones — surrounded by broken glass, painting a poignant picture of a Yankee tourist's photographic safari to Savannah sadly gone terribly wrong... All that would have taken is a bit of imagination and a broken Coke bottle Jan 04, 2012 at 10:07 PM

sbeme Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #8 · Savannah Steps... or something like this? Bob, hope you dont mind a bit of a hijack. And it is still Savannah. Scott Jan 04, 2012 at 10:56 PM

RustyBug Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #9 · Savannah Steps... Scott ... that's hittin' just a little too close too home. Jan 04, 2012 at 11:36 PM

cgardner Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #10 · Savannah Steps... Here you go.... Jan 04, 2012 at 11:56 PM

sbeme Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #11 · Savannah Steps... Jan 05, 2012 at 12:02 AM

RustyBug Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #12 · Savannah Steps... OUCH !!! That hurts ... Jan 05, 2012 at 12:25 AM

Bob Jarman Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #13 · Savannah Steps... Or, with apologies to Scott for not vetting this first.... Fun work folks Bob Edited on Jan 05, 2012 at 01:23 AM · View previous versions Jan 05, 2012 at 01:09 AM

sbeme Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #14 · Savannah Steps... I'm fine except that I think I was in sepia that day. S. Jan 05, 2012 at 01:16 AM

RustyBug Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #15 · Savannah Steps... Jan 05, 2012 at 01:32 AM

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