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Bob,
I\'m glad to see this. Because, as you know, I was also shooting railings and stairs alongside you and I have struggled to determine if any of my shots work. I am eager to hear what others think.
My thoughts:
I really like the toning.
I wish you shot to include more of the railings. The shot feels \"wide\" and dominated by the foreground stairs with less a sense of movement up the stairs, destination, progression than I would like.
The railings on the right become indistinct, lost in blocked up shadows and could stand a bit of recovery.
Maybe I\'ll put up a few stairway/railing shots for you to take a shot at, get others input. I find these subjects interesting but difficult to make work, much like trying to create effect images of trees.

Scott



Jan 04, 2012 at 08:56 AM





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