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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Crossing over - new images added


Sometimes I goota sit back and rethink things, only to come abck and change a lot in these iluustrations.

So feedback is always welcome.
I imagine it will be a few days as I let this one sit for a while and come back to it with changes.



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Dec 29, 2011 at 05:38 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Crossing over - new images added


This image has so many symbols in it that I'm not sure what is crossing over. I personally love a cropped version that shows the boy on the floating stones seeing the man coming out of the light the best. But I'm confused as to what your focus or meaning would be by the European style building with the asian tree with the multiple eagles, indian dancers, boy in shorts, does the man have a briefcase in his hand. Don't get me wrong, I admire your work, but this one feels like it got some of everything until I got lost.


Dec 30, 2011 at 03:59 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Crossing over - new images added


Maybe a boy walking across the stones may be a good starting point for the next one I do. But I can't crop this one. Otherwise I would lose the shot showing sunlight and the stars from the early moring shot.

I will rework some other things and take some of the objects out.
I do have a tendancy of assing too much sometimes.

but appreciate the feedback.
I will post my revised version here soon.
and also see what other feedback may be.

I think input from all peope plays a hand in making the final a better image.




Dec 30, 2011 at 02:08 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Crossing over - new images added


Here is different version as I continue to work with this.




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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Crossing over - new images added


Good work. I like them both, but 2nd looks 'cleaner.' The upper-left-hand area of the 1st is interesting in itself, but did seem to distract from the rest of the illustration. Also, like the added tone in 2nd one.

Fascinating stuff.


Best,

Alan



Dec 31, 2011 at 05:24 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Crossing over - new images added




Here one with a bit more work done on it.
Need to make the comet better so will work on that today.

Thanks for the feedback.
Keith



Jan 01, 2012 at 02:29 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Crossing over - new images added


Keith, my personal opinion is that the second image is more impactful by a factor of 2. Of course every change brings another thought, I might try taking the male figure out of the doorway to see if the child walking to the light becomes more of a visit to mother earth. Anyway, I really like the new version. BTW, the comet in the third version moves back toward the too crowded, too busy feel for me. It takes a lot of playing to fine tune.


Jan 02, 2012 at 05:10 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Crossing over - new images added


I agree with dadagallery; I like the second one more more. Very cool montage indeed.


Jan 02, 2012 at 11:14 PM





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