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Suh-Weeeet ride !!! Drool (from my youth).
My first thought is to ask, "What's your point?" that you are trying to convey.
I ask that because of the crop through so many of the bike's components, I'm not sure what it is that you want me to specifically look at. The right handlebar tries to grab my eye, but the scaffolding behind it competes with it. My eye then tries to find something else to land and it goes back to the frame areas, then the name, then the seat, brakes, chain, gear set, tires, hub, water bottle, etc. ... never really figuring out where you want me to be.
In that regard, Im' not sure why you cropped the bike the way you did. I'd suggest that you either show the bike as a whole ... or crop/compose differently to focus our attention a bit more strongly where you want to direct us. That, and maybe have a "less busy" background.
On a different note ... I can't even imagine what it must be like to ride such a piece of workmanship and technology. My sweetest ride was a French Motobecane back in the 70's, but I knew what to drool over. To that end, I see the dichotomy between the new composite materials and the old wooden barn.
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