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Archive 2011 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4

  
 
Uzay
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Hi all,

i'm not a frequent poster but i'd like to know what you think about these portraits
all of them are with D700 + Sigma 85 1.4 natural light
all comments and critiques

1 -http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1627/akasyaasltrkmen11.jpg
2 -http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8992/azraece15.jpg
3 -http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/2830/ceydaates18.jpg
4 -http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/158/ezgieyuboglu5.jpg
5 -http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5333/ozgeuzun24.jpg
6 -http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/102/pelinakil6.jpg
7 -http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/8720/seyhansasko59.jpg
8 -http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/2695/tulinozen1.jpg


Edited on Nov 18, 2011 at 10:26 AM · View previous versions



Nov 18, 2011 at 10:14 AM
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p.1 #2 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


wowsers, I want that lense! great images, beautiful subjects.


Nov 18, 2011 at 10:19 AM
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p.1 #3 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Nos. 3 and 5 look like candid snapshots, the rest look gorgeous! Love the eyes in that last one. No. 4 is my fave.

When you post a number of pics, it helps to number each one so it's easier for us to comment on them.

Great job!

Ron



Nov 18, 2011 at 10:23 AM
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p.1 #4 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


hmm, let's see: airfare from Philly to Turkey would be what ?

#5 is my favorite She is just flat out beautiful IMHO



Nov 18, 2011 at 10:44 AM
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p.1 #5 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


I agree with Ron; number 4 is a great shot. The expressions on some others just don't quite work for me (e.g. #3 and #8). All are good exposures.


Nov 18, 2011 at 10:46 AM
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p.1 #6 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


4 is by far my favorite - it just pops.

6 and 7 are very nice as well.



Nov 18, 2011 at 10:52 AM
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p.1 #7 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Nice!


Nov 18, 2011 at 10:58 AM
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p.1 #8 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Very nice. 6 is my fav. If it's not natural light, I would add separation light on her hair though or find non-dark background because her hair is dark.


Nov 18, 2011 at 11:02 AM
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p.1 #9 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


They're all really fine images, love 4 and 6! I'd clean up the stray hair on 3.


Nov 18, 2011 at 11:10 AM
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p.1 #10 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Nice portraits. #1,2,6 and 8 are my favorites. But why mention the lens? Is it important? Anyway, there is so much post processing going (too much for my taste) on that using these images as a (test)reference for Sigma 85 IQ is pretty useless IMHO.


Nov 18, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Uzay
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p.1 #11 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


thank you for your time, comments and critiques

@Daan B, i wrote the lens name because when searching by topics i thought it might be useful for some others, pp is used in every lens but amount of it differs for everybody's taste.

@jfinite, i tried to clean up the stray hair but ruined the image i'm not good at removing by clone stamp tool.

@friscoron, some of them are candids like 5 and 8 and very little pp i wanted to include these photos as well.

@fsiagian, all of them are natural light but you're right a liitle light on hair would be better




Nov 18, 2011 at 12:58 PM
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p.1 #12 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Use a very, very small healing brush, the one where you can sample nearby pixels (not the spot healing brush). Alt-Click next to the hair, and trace over the hair slowly, releasing and resampling where the image colors change (like the transition from cheek to lips).


Nov 18, 2011 at 01:22 PM
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p.1 #13 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


#4 is my favorite, but they are all very nice!


Nov 18, 2011 at 01:28 PM
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p.1 #14 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


I'm moving to Turkey.


Nov 18, 2011 at 02:07 PM
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p.1 #15 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


very nice! #4 is just awesome!


Nov 18, 2011 at 02:57 PM
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p.1 #16 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Good job on these. Here's a few nits and suggestions.

#1 and #2- The arms lead out of the frame in these. #1 could be cropped to H&S to fix it.

#3 The unattached hand bothers me a tiny bit.

#4. Notice how this pose is so much better than #1 & #2. The viewer's eye looks at her face, then travels down the arm which leads right back to the face. Very effective way to keep the viewer looking at the subject.

#6. I suggest cropping some of the chest area. It's larger in area than her head so it's getting too much attention. (Now if you had some cleavage down there, I might not want the crop, but the bare blurred chest isn't doing much.)

Love this set. Really nice, and it's not the lens.



Nov 18, 2011 at 05:38 PM
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p.1 #17 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


You must have done everything right with #4, because I'm head over heels in love with her!


Nov 18, 2011 at 05:43 PM
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p.1 #18 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Awesome shot. Photo 4 is my favorite .


Nov 18, 2011 at 10:11 PM
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p.1 #19 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Nice set. 1 & 4 are my favs.


Nov 19, 2011 at 12:20 AM
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p.1 #20 · Pretty Ladies with Sigma 85 1.4


Draper wrote:
I'm moving to Turkey.


me too



Nov 19, 2011 at 02:01 AM
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