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| p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · post editing : DDP+lightroom... my first time |
Really like your shots! I do all my post-processing in Lightroom, so feel free to ask more specific questions if you want...
It seems to me that the first shot has an imbalance: The flash is a bit too harsh and the background is a bit too dark/far away. I would try to tone down the flash (or diffuse it a bit) and place a colorful background right behind the subject.
The other two shots are much better in both respects, but the post-processing seems a bit too extreme for my taste. I would suggest less saturation and less sharpening to get a more natural feel. I also prefer to use other software for sharpening, as I don't like the way Lightroom does it...
Anyway, I hope that my long message helped. And, of course, if you check out my photos and decide you don't like the way they look, feel free to disregard everything I just said.