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Archive 2009 · Which do you prefer?

  
 
David Souch
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p.1 #1 · Which do you prefer?


This is my first attempt at a WA. I am thinking the first one, but would like some C&C. Thanks.

Image One

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3302/3630550659_ef6bd29ef2_o.jpg

Image Two

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2448/3630550401_05f4d12392_o.jpg

Image Three

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2429/3627199555_8e3718c7f4_o.jpg





Jun 15, 2009 at 10:45 PM
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p.1 #2 · Which do you prefer?


The composition is a little static in all three, but I like the third, best.


Jun 16, 2009 at 06:27 AM
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p.1 #3 · Which do you prefer?


The clarity on all three are exceptional, technically you have shooting flowers down! My only comment is that the crops are a bit too tight... back off and let a little of the background through, and don't center the subject into the frame as much. #2 is the best as far as comp, but its still crowded on the right side. Also - a little vignette to draw the eye to the subject might be appropriate here.. (although I tend not to overdue vignettes, it might make sense here..) The third is my fave - the texture and shadow detail is awesome!


Jun 16, 2009 at 07:48 AM
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p.1 #4 · Which do you prefer?


Thanks. Originally I was leaning towards the third shot. Think I will loosen the crop and go with it.


Jun 16, 2009 at 09:01 PM
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p.1 #5 · Which do you prefer?


As shots of beautiful blossoms, these are excellent. The color and detail is impressive. As a photo per se, I would just agree that you need a bit more room around the subjects.


Jun 21, 2009 at 04:40 PM
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p.1 #6 · Which do you prefer?


AuntiPode wrote:
The composition is a little static in all three, but I like the third, best.


I agree that they look too centred (static). I like the first best. They are all technically (exposure, depth, sharpness) very strong.

Scott



Jun 22, 2009 at 12:22 AM





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