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David Souch 1-time assignment winner

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p.1 #1 · Which do you prefer?

This is my first attempt at a WA. I am thinking the first one, but would like some C&C. Thanks.

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Jun 16, 2009 at 03:45 AM

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p.1 #2 · Which do you prefer?

The composition is a little static in all three, but I like the third, best.

Jun 16, 2009 at 11:27 AM

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p.1 #3 · Which do you prefer?

The clarity on all three are exceptional, technically you have shooting flowers down! My only comment is that the crops are a bit too tight... back off and let a little of the background through, and don't center the subject into the frame as much. #2 is the best as far as comp, but its still crowded on the right side. Also - a little vignette to draw the eye to the subject might be appropriate here.. (although I tend not to overdue vignettes, it might make sense here..) The third is my fave - the texture and shadow detail is awesome!

Jun 16, 2009 at 12:48 PM

David Souch 1-time assignment winner

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p.1 #4 · Which do you prefer?

Thanks. Originally I was leaning towards the third shot. Think I will loosen the crop and go with it.

Jun 17, 2009 at 02:01 AM

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p.1 #5 · Which do you prefer?

As shots of beautiful blossoms, these are excellent. The color and detail is impressive. As a photo per se, I would just agree that you need a bit more room around the subjects.

Jun 21, 2009 at 09:40 PM

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p.1 #6 · Which do you prefer?

AuntiPode wrote:
The composition is a little static in all three, but I like the third, best.

I agree that they look too centred (static). I like the first best. They are all technically (exposure, depth, sharpness) very strong.

Scott

Jun 22, 2009 at 05:22 AM

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