Shot Jennifer and Joseph Yesterday. Fun couple, nice day all the fun stuff. I will post a whole set from this one soon, but here are some of my favorites from the shoot. C&C is always welcome.
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I agree with Paul's assessment.
1. Focus is wrong or you need more depth of field. She is the main subject, so she must be sharper. He could either be in or out of focus depending on goal, choice of DOF.
2. Paul's rework improves. Crop feels tight at the top. I'm not sure background is so great. Its busy, distracting. Shallow DOF might have helped a bit.
3. Flare doesnt work for me. Building feels tilted down right. Contrast is low.
4 and 6. Definitely a good subject. 4 has less distraction in the background, whereas 6 has the red chair pulling the eye away from the subject. 4 would be better with the napkins removed, a bit sharper. DOF is well-chosen. Needs a bump in contrast.
Hope this helps.
Scott
Thanks for the comments. Negative works for me! It helps me improve and that is why I post. I do have some more conventional stuff, I am still working on this wedding. I will post a full set soon. Thanks agian for taking the time to comment!
