#3 has a great sense of place but could have used some better posing, not to say the pose you have is bad but I would have liked to see a few more of her facing the camera in that setting. the third shot is heads above the rest
doug
I like the comp of #3, but I don't care much for the model's pose. Same as above.
I don't care much for the clutter in #2. Everything seems to be in the way, including the model's hair.
#1 is very PJ-esque, though I"m a little confused about the purpose of the karate kid-like bandanna and OJ bottle...and the shoes don't really fit the scene.
