I don't know if I like this shot. I wanted the layering - with the three levels of people - and the fact that the two closest are moving in opposite directions. And I wanted the last (the girl) to be facing away as she was, well, enjoying the attention of passerbys.
But, it sort of bugs me, and I'm not sure why. I feel like it could have been better, maybe if it showed her interacting with someone passing by?
Desmolicious wrote:
I don't know if I like this shot. I wanted the layering - with the three levels of people - and the fact that the two closest are moving in opposite directions. And I wanted the last (the girl) to be facing away as she was, well, enjoying the attention of passerbys.
But, it sort of bugs me, and I'm not sure why. I feel like it could have been better, maybe if it showed her interacting with someone passing by?
Hmm.
I like it, though agree it's lacking something to really make it memorable. I liked that the guy's clothing is cyan, the girl's on the right is magenta and the girl in the bikini is in yellow - the process colors - CMY. Just missing something K for black. Maybe that's what's missing.
Taking another look at it, I'd be tempted to crop it like this:
The stuff on the left is somewhat distracting, as are the white window frames at the top.
