This is a solid set. You did well. My nits would be this:
-your photos are stronger without the light vignette.
-try not sharpening, clarity adding, black slidering so much. You may be pleased with the outcome.
-Your studio lighting is good but might be a tad hot.
scott shoemake - I'll try some of your sugestions next time around. Though I don't use the clarity and sharpen commands in LR (don't like them). I had the studio shots a little darker and changed it as suggested in a earlyer post. Maybe I over did it.
Anyway, Thanks. I really like your work by the way.