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chris cupp
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p.1 #1 · Gil in parking garage


comments and critiques are always welcome, i'm trying to become a better photographer and i need your help

1dmk2n 24-70/2.8

http://www.chriscupp.com/gil.jpg


Edited on May 15, 2008 at 09:40 PM



May 15, 2008 at 09:39 PM
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p.1 #2 · Gil in parking garage


Hi Chris,

This is nice capture. I like the look you captured. There is not much to say about how to improve. I dont mind the blown out parts but the tilt is slightly distacting (I notice my head tilting to the left). Don't get me wrong- I am all for non-conventional cropping, but in this case I dont feel it adds to the shot.

Regards

Marnix



May 16, 2008 at 02:10 AM
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p.1 #3 · Gil in parking garage


The bright backgrounds fight for attention over the subject. Especially the "window" from inside the garage.


May 16, 2008 at 05:41 AM
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p.1 #4 · Gil in parking garage


I like it. The background does not seem too distracting to me, although the tilt does. but if you wanted to get deep, I could see the picture representing dirty garage to his back, and green evergreens in the future, where the tilt and background would add to it. well done.




May 16, 2008 at 09:14 AM
chris cupp
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p.1 #5 · Gil in parking garage


thanks for the comments and suggestions.
i did this as a test shoot to see what i could get out of this parking garage as i have an engagement session on sunday and i planned on using this place.

does anyone know of a powersource that i can use on location? i want the alienbee powerpack, but i don't have time to order one. will a UPS work for something like this?

thanks a lot!
chris



May 16, 2008 at 11:22 AM
Andre Goli
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p.1 #6 · Gil in parking garage


I have to agree with j.curtis on the garage windows.... Try to hide them with your hand, and you will get a stronger picture... Nice pix overall...

Edited on May 16, 2008 at 12:46 PM



May 16, 2008 at 12:45 PM
Jim Rickards
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p.1 #7 · Gil in parking garage


j.curtis wrote:
The bright backgrounds fight for attention over the subject. Especially the "window" from inside the garage.

I agree.



May 16, 2008 at 01:10 PM





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