This is nice capture. I like the look you captured. There is not much to say about how to improve. I dont mind the blown out parts but the tilt is slightly distacting (I notice my head tilting to the left). Don't get me wrong- I am all for non-conventional cropping, but in this case I dont feel it adds to the shot.
I like it. The background does not seem too distracting to me, although the tilt does. but if you wanted to get deep, I could see the picture representing dirty garage to his back, and green evergreens in the future, where the tilt and background would add to it. well done.
thanks for the comments and suggestions.
i did this as a test shoot to see what i could get out of this parking garage as i have an engagement session on sunday and i planned on using this place.
does anyone know of a powersource that i can use on location? i want the alienbee powerpack, but i don't have time to order one. will a UPS work for something like this?