I like this idea! Can I offer a few suggestions? First of all, the frame needs to be straight...it's tipping to the left. I wouldn't crop off the fingers of the right hand...I'd use both hands to frame the frame. You might also adjust the lighting so that the whole frame is highlighted. I like the sepia tone, and think you'll have a super entry with just a bit of tweaking!
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Philly Rains wrote:
I like this idea! Can I offer a few suggestions? First of all, the frame needs to be straight...it's tipping to the left. I wouldn't crop off the fingers of the right hand...I'd use both hands to frame the frame. You might also adjust the lighting so that the whole frame is highlighted. I like the sepia tone, and think you'll have a super entry with just a bit of tweaking!
Remember...advice is free here, so take it for what it's worth.
Thanks Philly, appreciate your taking the time to help out, all very good suggestions. I have a few other additions that I'd like to try out as well, so I am planing to reshoot sometime tonight. Hopefully I'll be able to hold the frame straight and keep my fingers this time!
Nice to see your work again Jason. You always have such creativity. The hands add so much strength to this image. The lighting on the heart is just right. Beautiful color.
contre-jour wrote:
Nice to see your work again Jason. You always have such creativity. The hands add so much strength to this image. The lighting on the heart is just right. Beautiful color.
Jamie
Thank you Jamie, that means a lot to me. Glad you like it.
Jazno wrote:
Comments and critiques always welcome.
Jason
Nice capture Jason. I agree with an earlier comment that showing all of the hands would be better - maybe one could be of the opposite gender? Just a thought...
Bob
levartze wrote:
Nice capture Jason. I agree with an earlier comment that showing all of the hands would be better - maybe one could be of the opposite gender? Just a thought...
Bob
