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DanielScott wrote:
Really fun concept, beautiful models, and I really love the styling with the silk outfits.
If you don't mind my critique, I think the second woman from the top looks like her face is being squished, and the woman on the bottom has an expression that makes her look uncomfortable. I also kind of wish the background was a little darker, that way the empty space in the top right corner wasn't as eye-catching. Really good work regardless.
Daniel, yes always appreciate critique!
This was actually not a very easy shot. It was a very awkward position to try and hold themselves up without squashing the ones underneath. Got 2 or 3 quick shots and waiting for the lights to regenerate before they collapsed into a laughing pile!
I'm sure I can darken the upper right corner without losing the separation. I've tried to crop more of it out but it loses it's spatial relation with the composition while keeping a 4:5 for IG.
Thanks so much!
John
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