Archive 2021 · Malene and Trygg and Torunn
p.1 #1Malene and Trygg and Torunn
Going through LR and trying to clean up some folders and came across this. I'm not a people photog but my son talked me into doing a session of his kids for a Christmas portrait.
Canon 5D Canon 24-105 F/4.0L
Canon 5D Canon 24-105 F/4.0L
Oct 22, 2021 at 10:20 AM
p.1 #2Malene and Trygg and Torunn
Great job capturing a genuine moment between these three. I think they might be a bit over exposed though, as the highlights on their skin seem very harsh and might benefit from some reduction in whichever raw editor you might use. Perhaps reduce the saturation a smidge as well, as some areas seem over saturated. I might also consider using photoshop to extend the bottom of the image a bit, as the crop seems a bit too close to their feet, to my liking at least.
Oct 22, 2021 at 11:33 AM
p.1 #3Malene and Trygg and Torunn
@DanielScott, thank you for taking the time to offer these valuable, appreciated suggestions.
Oct 22, 2021 at 03:19 PM
p.1 #4Malene and Trygg and Torunn
I like the vibrance! With the Holiday Season pretty sparse for color, I like them! Kids hand-in-hand, smiling, laughing...Well done!
Dan
Dan
Oct 23, 2021 at 08:04 AM
p.1 #5Malene and Trygg and Torunn
very nice and genuine moment captured here, well done!
Oct 24, 2021 at 02:57 PM