Glad you posted them here. The first shot is the winner for me though the book could be cropped out. All are good really except the second where she's washed out by the light.
Though having come over from a gear-oriented site, I promised myself that I would focus on the learning about photography and *not* be obsessed with equipment. :-)
Returning to the pics/photography, I also like #2. One could argue that she's a bit washed out but I think you were going for that effect.
Also, is this an example of Classic Chrome? I didn't really experience the 60s but some of your shots give me that "vibe", if you could call it that.
Edited: to say "*not* be obsessed with equipment. "