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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Desiree


Desiree asked me for a picture on the street, I shoot some but this one really is my favorite.

I like her natural and relaxed facial expressions and the drama of the B&W PP.

http://marcelobarrera.zenfolio.com/img/s11/v28/p1953831465-6.jpg

Have a great everyone.

Marcelo



Mar 20, 2016 at 08:54 PM
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Very nice, Marcelo! I might like it better with her eyes open, but this is killer just as it is. Great job!



Mar 20, 2016 at 10:26 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Desiree


Very nicely done with a very pretty young woman.


Mar 22, 2016 at 07:24 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Desiree


Really nice image, but I would prefer a little more DOF to get a little more context on the setting.

I also would have preferred if she was not clutching the necklace.

For this image, I like the capture with her looking down instead of at the camera. It gives a pensive look to the image.

TFS!



Mar 22, 2016 at 10:12 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Desiree


I think its a nice shot. I like the necklace clutch.


Mar 22, 2016 at 07:28 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Desiree


friscoron wrote:
Very nice, Marcelo! I might like it better with her eyes open, but this is killer just as it is. Great job!


Thank you Ron for the feedback, I really appreciate it.

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peacefrog33756 wrote:
Very nicely done with a very pretty young woman.


Thank you peacefrog.

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film_4ever wrote:
Really nice image, but I would prefer a little more DOF to get a little more context on the setting.

I also would have preferred if she was not clutching the necklace.

For this image, I like the capture with her looking down instead of at the camera. It gives a pensive look to the image.

TFS!


Thank you for the feedback, I like it also the pensive look.

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Evan Baines wrote:
I think its a nice shot. I like the necklace clutch.


Thank you Evan




Mar 23, 2016 at 10:08 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Desiree


This is amazing. Lighting, DOF, clarity and B&W conversion is all amazing


Mar 23, 2016 at 11:11 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Desiree


fstop212 wrote:
This is amazing. Lighting, DOF, clarity and B&W conversion is all amazing


Thank you for the comment..!



Mar 25, 2016 at 12:44 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Desiree


fstop212 wrote:
This is amazing. Lighting, DOF, clarity and B&W conversion is all amazing


Thank you for the comment..!



Mar 25, 2016 at 12:44 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Desiree


Very NICE shot Marcelo!


Mar 28, 2016 at 01:18 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Desiree


Lovely image, processing is just right too


Mar 30, 2016 at 06:49 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Desiree


Very nice shot Marcelo. I like that she is looking down; it works with the rest of the image.
Glenn



Mar 30, 2016 at 09:04 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Desiree


Chris Moy wrote:
Very NICE shot Marcelo!


Thank you Chris.

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Stephaniespix wrote:
Lovely image, processing is just right too


Thank you Stephanie for the kind words.

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svopen wrote:
Very nice shot Marcelo. I like that she is looking down; it works with the rest of the image.
Glenn


Thank you Glenn, I really appreciate your feedback.




Mar 30, 2016 at 10:08 AM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Desiree


Lovely portrait. I think the blurring is necessary as I don't think anyone wants to see a clear shot of the repair truck on the left. In fact, I still might like to see it cropped out. My main quibble with the image as it stands is the difference between the brighter skin tones of her chest and the darker ones of her face. A more uniform version might give the image a slightly subtler look. On the whole, a very clear and appealing image of your subject.


Mar 30, 2016 at 10:31 AM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Desiree


Brev00 wrote:
Lovely portrait. I think the blurring is necessary as I don't think anyone wants to see a clear shot of the repair truck on the left. In fact, I still might like to see it cropped out. My main quibble with the image as it stands is the difference between the brighter skin tones of her chest and the darker ones of her face. A more uniform version might give the image a slightly subtler look. On the whole, a very clear and appealing image of your subject.


Brev,

Thank you so much for the feedback and the observation about the color tone on her face/chest, it is something I didn't notice until you mention it.

She use a darker tone of make up and it is reason of it but I will try to make it more even in PP.

Thank you again.



Mar 30, 2016 at 08:19 PM





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