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"Rift"

Taken during the same sunset as "Furiosa"

https://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/1367391/0?keyword=furiosa#13031987

except this was the original high cloud burn I was after. There hasn't been a lot of coastal burns in NorCal lately (not a lot of clouds either).


Techy Stuff: I blended 3 shots. 1 for the sky, 1 for the water and 1 for the rock. Shot with Canon 5D MK II /w 16-35 F4 L IS. Edited in PS Cloud and TKACTIONS.


Comments and crits welcome,

Jason




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Jun 15, 2015 at 01:23 PM
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p.1 #2 · Rift


Very nice, I like this one a lot.



Jun 15, 2015 at 01:24 PM
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p.1 #3 · Rift


Cool shot.
I like how the sky happened to line up with the wave.

David



Jun 15, 2015 at 02:40 PM
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p.1 #4 · Rift


Its a really nice shot. as I scroll down to see it though, I think it works a little better with slight crop from top and bottom.


Jun 15, 2015 at 02:45 PM
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p.1 #5 · Rift


very nice shot


Jun 15, 2015 at 03:29 PM
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p.1 #6 · Rift


Incredible image Jason.


Jun 15, 2015 at 06:25 PM
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p.1 #7 · Rift


Great ligntings and composition. Tides and clouds met at the focus where the rock is situated.


Jun 16, 2015 at 09:31 AM
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p.1 #8 · Rift


oh yeah!

wow

the moon and the starts might not be lined up, but everything else is.

I really like this, thanks for sharing some inspiration.



Jun 16, 2015 at 11:10 AM
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p.1 #9 · Rift


Nice one Jason.

you seem to be "lucky" predicting your sunset's down the coast, good job .

Paul



Jun 16, 2015 at 11:28 AM
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p.1 #10 · Rift


Great shot!


Jun 16, 2015 at 12:04 PM
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p.1 #11 · Rift


Beautiful picture and wonderful composition! I think that a slightly faster shutter speed could have brought out more detail in the water in the foreground.


Jun 16, 2015 at 01:14 PM
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p.1 #12 · Rift


Hey Jason,

Color and processing are fantastic. The cloud and wave formations echoing each other is what makes it so compelling. Great job!

Tim



Jun 16, 2015 at 01:56 PM
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p.1 #13 · Rift


kevindar wrote:
Its a really nice shot. as I scroll down to see it though, I think it works a little better with slight crop from top and bottom.


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Thanks for the input Kevin. I'll look at other crops before print.


Ipanematom wrote:
Beautiful picture and wonderful composition! I think that a slightly faster shutter speed could have brought out more detail in the water in the foreground.


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Thanks for the input. Unfortunately, I don't have any other exposures with a faster FF speed. Truth be told the wave action wasn't planned ahead of time. Going back now I would've shot with a faster shutter speed, but I do like the sense of motion this one gives.




Thanks everyone for commenting and the love!

Jason




Jun 17, 2015 at 03:29 PM
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p.1 #14 · Rift


Beautiful sky colors, I like the dynamic of the wave coming at viewer.

Did you got wet ? Wave look big coming to you...



Jun 17, 2015 at 04:44 PM
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p.1 #15 · Rift


I like your image a lot. The leading lines take the eye right where it should. The patterns are complimentary and the colors nicely balanced.

If I had one small crit, for me, the foreground seems a bit hot. My eye goes there immediately. The eye is then lead to what I consider the main subject. Like I said, small and just my opinion.

Nicely done!



Jun 17, 2015 at 06:32 PM
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p.1 #16 · Rift


MaxGag wrote:
Beautiful sky colors, I like the dynamic of the wave coming at viewer.

Did you got wet ? Wave look big coming to you...


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I sure did. Part of the charm I love photographing the coast. I just love the ocean!




Michael H wrote:
I like your image a lot. The leading lines take the eye right where it should. The patterns are complimentary and the colors nicely balanced.

If I had one small crit, for me, the foreground seems a bit hot. My eye goes there immediately. The eye is then lead to what I consider the main subject. Like I said, small and just my opinion.

Nicely done!


Thanks Michael on the Crit. I had burned down that area but I guess the white foam areas do seem a bit whiter. I might go back and touch that up.


Jason





Jun 17, 2015 at 10:51 PM
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p.1 #17 · Rift


Hey Jason,

Nice one here. An interesting composition for sure.

Jim



Jun 18, 2015 at 04:31 AM
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p.1 #18 · Rift


Very nice! Love the colors of the sky


Jun 18, 2015 at 07:19 AM
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p.1 #19 · Rift


Beautifully done... I love the composition even though the subject is centered. For some reason, it works there.


Jun 18, 2015 at 09:57 AM
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p.1 #20 · Rift


Thanks Jim, Matt, Amaji!


Jason



Jun 18, 2015 at 01:22 PM
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