Jman13 Offline Upload & Sell: On
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I like the vast majority of these...and your daughter is quite a model! I'm not a big fan of the composite simply because the lighting is all wrong. She (and the scene) should be backlit, and the lantern should actually be throwing light on her and ahead of her. The (soft) shadows on her face show that the light source (assuming overcast sunlight) was to her front and right rather than from the moon (for the scene) and the lantern to her left (for her)..it very much looks like a composite rather than blending into the scene, so it takes me completely out of the moment.
I really love the solo B&W shots at the beginning...some beautiful tones and great expressions from your daughter.
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