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Left Image
I like the pose, I like the crop, I like his expression. As far as light goes I am not experienced enough to comment but to me it looks "fine". The light is neither over the top (dramatic) or safe (plain or lacking some depth).
He reminds me of an old lab... been around, seen a lot, knows better than to try to change anything because people are people.
Right Image
I like everything about the setup and you did well not to make his arm or cover (is that the right term?) become to large because they are in front. I wish his right arm (sleeve) was perfectly straight.
The control of the light is fantastic. I love the Rembrant on his cheek and also the little bit of highlight on the left side of his lip to give it some definition. I am not sure if you planned that or not but it is expertly done.
His expression is very happy and I am not reading much beyond that he is happy to be serving his country. That is not to say that that is bad but compared to the left image I am not able to generate or imagine as much of a story.
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