I shot both of these this morning, as part of my ongoing series of military portraits. You can see the rest of the series and a description of my purpose here: http://bainesphoto.com/index.php?/color/military/
Left Image
I like the pose, I like the crop, I like his expression. As far as light goes I am not experienced enough to comment but to me it looks "fine". The light is neither over the top (dramatic) or safe (plain or lacking some depth).
He reminds me of an old lab... been around, seen a lot, knows better than to try to change anything because people are people.
Right Image
I like everything about the setup and you did well not to make his arm or cover (is that the right term?) become to large because they are in front. I wish his right arm (sleeve) was perfectly straight.
The control of the light is fantastic. I love the Rembrant on his cheek and also the little bit of highlight on the left side of his lip to give it some definition. I am not sure if you planned that or not but it is expertly done.
His expression is very happy and I am not reading much beyond that he is happy to be serving his country. That is not to say that that is bad but compared to the left image I am not able to generate or imagine as much of a story.
I think these two together with switched backgrounds would be awesome. Black uniform white backdrop and white uniform black backdrop. I think that would look cool.
Thank you all for the comments! I always appreciate feedback.
I think the inversion suggestion is an interesting one from a graphical standpoint, but one the would emphasize the uniforms more as a result of contrasting center of interest.
Evan, I love these portraits and the intent behind them. Let me know if you need to photograph an Air Force officer. Can you please post a setup shot like you did in your previous portraits
I did not think to do a setup shot this time, but will try to remember in the future. Both shots were with a single 64" soft silver PLM with white front diffuser and a reflector here or there as needed.
I've got at least one or two USAF lined up, so stay tuned. We're also going to get some non-butter bars in here as well...
Both have a simple and refined look to them. The left image is one that I would expect less "happy" in, being low key, but works nicely. I would like to see a tad more detail in the right eye on the left image.
I prefer the right image for the expression and lighting.
For just getting back into lighting, you haven't missed a beat. The lighting is almost perfect. Only thing is there maybe could have been a tad more light on the left shot, right side eye.
I love both these images. In my opinion two of the strongest in the series so far. Both would have no problem as stand alone images but displayed in this way, they seem especially complimentary and pleasing.
This set is fantastic on a few levels. I think the project itself is a well thought and executed idea which immediately made me remember looking through old war photos from my family.
Josh Evilsizor wrote:
For just getting back into lighting, you haven't missed a beat. The lighting is almost perfect. Only thing is there maybe could have been a tad more light on the left shot, right side eye.
+1
Very interesting juxtaposed diptych. Always appreciate your care and intense attention to details.
Nov 19, 2013 at 10:11 AM
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Two really fine portraits, Evan.
I don't do formal portraits like this- but it seems as though getting the background in #1 to work so well must be tough. And imo you've accomplished it perfectly.
Charlie
