Lovely Ian.
I'm liking the use of just the modeling lamp and have used it in a couple of shoots recently.
Typically I use it at the start of a shoot to get the model relaxed/
Regards
Bud
Yep, I like the first one. Really nice! Maybe something with the cheek but very very little. Could be the hair distracting from the eye? Does not really matter as the photo flatters her.