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Archive 2011 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!
  
 
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p.1 #1 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!


Not a drop consumed (before the picture)!

Revised based on feedback.






Edited on Sep 27, 2011 at 04:19 PM · View previous versions
Sep 25, 2011 at 11:51 AM
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p.1 #2 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!


Neat image, I was waiting for someone to post a distorted eye through the glass
Sep 26, 2011 at 09:29 AM
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p.1 #3 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!


The expression sells this image. Might work better if you diminished the background--darkened it or matted it out. Put the focus exactly where you want it, on the eye(s) and the bottle.

Great concept and execution.

Chad
Sep 26, 2011 at 05:51 PM
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p.1 #4 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!


Well done! I agree with Chad about diminishing the background.

Jim
Sep 26, 2011 at 09:35 PM
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p.1 #5 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!


Especially in the top left corner. It seems to distract the eye from the focal point.
Sep 27, 2011 at 12:09 PM
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p.1 #6 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!


Thanks for suggestions. I will give it a go.
Sep 27, 2011 at 03:44 PM
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p.1 #7 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!


, love it.
Sep 27, 2011 at 09:06 PM
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p.1 #8 · #468 5:00 and I got my eye on you!


Very funny, you should specify am or pm lol.
Oct 04, 2011 at 07:59 PM





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