Model: Ciara
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jdben622
Registered: Apr 20, 2003
Total Posts: 3991
Country: United States

Here are a couple from a shoot done a couple weeks ago. We did many different scenes.



Burk Young
Registered: Jul 27, 2008
Total Posts: 454
Country: United States

Nice images :-) I like the harshness in no 1 and no 2 seems to show the young lady nicely :-)

My only two nits would be on number one the face has no separation in the dark areas from the background... maybe a touch of fill I could live with the body not having separation... Viewed from color corrected monitor.

Number two my eyes are drawn to her hands for some reason... not just what they are doing but maybe the skin on the hands doesn't seem to match the rest of the body ??



dadagallery
Registered: Jan 01, 2003
Total Posts: 822
Country: United States

I'd shop out the one finger (?) showing in #1 near the bottom. It is the only thing getting light in that otherwise black area and thus draws attention that it doesn't need.



went
Registered: Apr 27, 2002
Total Posts: 1331
Country: New Zealand

There is a spot on her neck in the first one, it's got to go
went



jdben622
Registered: Apr 20, 2003
Total Posts: 3991
Country: United States

Thanks for the feedback.



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