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kwalsh Registered: Aug 30, 2005 Total Posts: 1242 Country: United States |
Howdy, been at FM a long time, but rarely shared any photos. Trying to make a concerted effort to get more feedback from other photographers. A couple from a Death Valley trip I just got back from. Criticism gladly accepted! ![]() ![]() Ken |
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DavidKvapil Registered: Jan 10, 2009 Total Posts: 207 Country: United States |
Incredible, especially the second. Thank you for sharing. |
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Zeph Registered: Jan 30, 2005 Total Posts: 4574 Country: United States |
These are very unique! Both hold my attention and have some unusual characteristics, the first with your vantage point, where was this shot from? And the second with its creamy texture. |
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Rob-Bob Registered: Feb 07, 2005 Total Posts: 1251 Country: United States |
Ken, |
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Henry W Registered: Oct 23, 2003 Total Posts: 6649 Country: United States |
Oh man. |
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cloudrippr Registered: Jul 17, 2004 Total Posts: 24 Country: United States |
What's to criticize |
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cubestwin Registered: Jan 16, 2005 Total Posts: 474 Country: United States |
This is good work here! |
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alichty Registered: Jan 19, 2009 Total Posts: 8815 Country: United States |
Wow - please jump and share more 'cuz these are some really nice images. I love the contrasts and tones in the first image and the second is a delightful comp of textures. |
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pearlstreet Registered: Apr 03, 2004 Total Posts: 7727 Country: United States |
Two outstanding, gorgeous shots. Now, you HAVE to post more. I'm hooked. |
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Tim ONeill Registered: Feb 06, 2003 Total Posts: 16435 Country: United States |
Killer shots. That first one just rocks! As Sharon said, we are hooked. Post mere and soon. |
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ajkessler Registered: Dec 20, 2005 Total Posts: 3338 Country: United States |
Ken, I'd love to hear more about the processing on these. In the first, you've got very heavy shadows in the mountains, and very light shadows on the dunes, and in the second you've retained those very light shadows where I'd expect deeper ones. It's almost as if you shot these on a mildly overcast day, but the skies look pretty clear. |
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Fo Tollery Registered: Mar 23, 2004 Total Posts: 2914 Country: United States |
Normally, I might think the shadows are a bit heavy in the first, but it actually works very well in this instance. The 2nd is just great. Very nice intro! |
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aFeinberg Registered: Mar 15, 2006 Total Posts: 3780 Country: United States |
Holy wow. That first one is nuts. The amount of texture, depth...contrast is great. Awesome shot. 2nd is sensual. Great work and keep posting (700px high max) ;-) |
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bshamilton Registered: Aug 28, 2005 Total Posts: 34176 Country: United States |
Well it's about time, I'd say. |
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hugh Registered: Jan 09, 2002 Total Posts: 29225 Country: United States |
Hello Ken, fine sensual curves and textures in the second one. I'm with Sharon on the halos in the first one. That said, I love the very dark areas contrasting with the glow of the sand. I'm not sure what is possible, but I'd like to see a version without the foreground ridge blocking the empty area in front of the dunes. Looking forward to seeing more of your work |
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kwalsh Registered: Aug 30, 2005 Total Posts: 1242 Country: United States |
Wow, thanks for all the very kind words! I was really trying to get a different perspective with these shots, dunes are so popular to shoot and I have a number of more conventional images from the past. I've always been blown away (sometimes intimidated even) by the talent displayed in this forum so the positive feedback is very meaningful. |
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kschweichhart Registered: Jan 07, 2006 Total Posts: 4609 Country: Austria |
Great set, I especially like second, very interesting work. |
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JasonJ Registered: Oct 02, 2005 Total Posts: 2603 Country: United States |
One of the most beautiful shots of Death Valley I have ever seen. |
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Jarvone Registered: Dec 25, 2004 Total Posts: 2245 Country: United States |
Great B&W tones...especially in the first one which is beautiful. Nice work! You need to share more often with such quality work. Jarv |
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skippyscage Registered: Dec 29, 2005 Total Posts: 95 Country: United States |
I love that first shot, but I would love it even more without the halo along the horizon |